Friday, October 7, 2011

2nd Draft of "Stress Busters"

Here's what I revised based on what you suggested in class today.  What do you think?  I know I like it a lot better.  If only I could make the font bigger, then I'd be even happier.  Post a comment below, but make sure you write your name first before you write your thoughts.  For example,
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2 comments:

  1. sashaOctober 10, 2011 at 4:29 PM

    Please tell me more about your writing group. Like who is in it?

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  2. Michelle ShawOctober 15, 2011 at 9:38 PM

    Hi, Sasha. My writing group has 4 other teachers in it who teach at different schools in Minneapolis. We've been meeting for 3 years now once a month, and we've become good friends. In fact, every summer we have a writing retreat where we spend 3 days and 2 nights together writing, relaxing, and enjoying one another's company. Do you think it would be fun to have a writing group?

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